Ohmigoshhh, this was so good! I'm so, so impressed with the writing as always! Minyan, you are an inspiration omg. From the beginning it was super easy to fit into the role of the MC (and admire how cute they are!), and to be sucked into the relationships they were supposed to have had with Alto and Caesar. (Like, goshdarnit, Alto seemed like a jerk at first, but I just couldn't help but love him more and more with every scene. There was a moment when he said something honestly sweet and so un-tsundere-y that it surprised me in the best way.) That moment when the MC was freaking out after Alto told them they were an android, that was amazing, I was shook. I think the only thing I wasn't sure about was how easy it was to kill Caesar with the poison; I was wondering why they didn't do that in the first place? Maybe they had to do it in public? But I think that was the only thing, and it made the rest of the plot fit smoothly. I did want to see the dance and the catching-up-with-Alto scenes, but I understand that that would be more work! Other things I enjoyed: the characters' voices were so clear and fun. The immediacy of the looming decision was intense. And every soft moment was so good. I really enjoyed everything so much! Your art is always getting better and better, I love looking at it, and the interface too! And I really like the design of the fashion and buildings in the background too. And especially the song that plays on the main menu, I just sat and listened to the whole thing! And fave CG: leaping into Alto's arms. Huge kudos to everyone who worked on this! <3 <3 <3
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A CLAMP School mystery, a healthy sprinkling of fluff, and a generous dash of Duklyon.
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I've played your game twice now and remain ever impressed! ^u^
I'm in a class on Jane Austen and Adaptation, and I was wondering if I also could write a paper on your game? As an adaptation of one of her novels, it's one of the most unique, faithful, queer-positive, and diverse ones I've seen, if not THE most. Thank you so much for making it and I hope you can keep working on it as you are able. :)